Week 5 - 1st October - Does our Story line make sense?

LQ: How can we ensure our storylines makes sense?

Today we read through a scene. I add what word was wrong and change.  My group adds some sentences not me. But I change some words that it was wrong.                                                     

WWW: I did some word that was wrong, I change some word that was wrong.

EBI: If I add some sentence in the scene.